Picking up where we left off at page 4, Mercy may just strangle Candice before the day is done… Things that didn’t make the final cut – Daisy’s “they’re called breasts” line used to go further – “surely you’re rich[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Daisy's Diner
…I’m tempted to do a follow-up where Violet suggests that “Targaryen” would’ve been better than “show poodle”, but 1.) Mercy might not get the reference, 2.) Vi shouldn’t be watching Game of Thrones, and 3.) I have too many follow-ups[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Normally Mercy might like to stick around and gloat, but it’s only a matter of time before the girls start asking her questions she doesn’t want to have deal with…
That’s it for this chapter! Although there is more to tell… To keep things simple, I have a couple of images planned where the girls ask their parents for a few more details. Candice has a more involved follow-up which[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The good news is, Daisy’s new assistant manager isn’t Rose, as she feared! I’m not sure she’d find this to be much better, though. Something I can’t quite convey on the page – the way I hear the characters in[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sooner or later I need to do a chapter that flashes back to Aimee getting hired at the diner, or even just a chapter that shows how bad her anxiety can be. So far I’ve done more telling than showing,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…